Hee, I am with you, believe me. A friend and I reread it together (over AIM), and all that basically consisted of was the two of us quoting every line back to each other and snickering like crazy.
That's awesome that your husband read the whole thing, especially if he's never ventured into fic before! That's definitely a high compliment, but it's totally deserved in this case, so.
I can only chorus in with your last bit. I like how it's 90% comedy, yet the 10% serious really hits it out of the park, too. I just can't imagine bodyswap fic being done more expertly than this.
Re: choked up
That's awesome that your husband read the whole thing, especially if he's never ventured into fic before! That's definitely a high compliment, but it's totally deserved in this case, so.
I can only chorus in with your last bit. I like how it's 90% comedy, yet the 10% serious really hits it out of the park, too. I just can't imagine bodyswap fic being done more expertly than this.