definitely. the use of parallel universes was very good here, but it does leave the story vulnerable to a lot of illogical situations. and the story did come full circle, and in context it was a good ending, but i still feel that after all of the pain and sadness, that tiny glimmer of hope wasn't enough to make me feel better. basically, i'm saying that it was a good story but i didn't like it. does that make sense?

just to be clear, i never meant to insult anyone. it was a very good story, but it left me feeling a little unsatisfied. sorry if anyone took my criticisms personally. :)

and i'll absolutely stick with you! if everyone wrote exactly the same thing over and over, it would get boring. i like having new things to read.