It is very clever. I think I am with amyhit in having trouble taking off my writer's cap and just being a reader who can let other writers play in our universe pretty freely, assuming they can write. I mean, this is not usually my issue at all. And I have no objection in theory to her writing anything she wants. It just that it makes me feel uncomfortable to read this; moreover, I think she means it to be uncomfortable, for both readers and writers, at least on some level.

Maybe you are just better than I am at compartmentalizing. Maybe this is a good thing. Maybe I should work on it.