Each time I've read the line, it's made me want to grit my teeth. That, and her eccentric use of punctuation made my second read-through of this story a much less pleasant experience than the first. I finally gave in and just started correcting the errors on my copy so I wouldn't have to look at them anymore.


It's very jarringly incorrect to me, and I took that feeling with me away from the story.

That's it exactly.