This story was good. The author really had a command of the subject matter and the characters. However, it was a little long winded.

Fan fiction is pretty cool because there is not a great need for exposition. The reader (usually) already has a lot of background knowledge, and lengthy character descriptions and observations are not necessary. I think this story could be trimmed a lot and still retain what's important.

That being said, 'Fragile’ is a very interesting and thorough story. I enjoyed it even if I skimmed some paragraphs.