Story 220: "Fragile" by Ophelia

[wendelah1]

It's too quiet around here, folks.

I just finished reading this next story, nominated by infinitlight. It's a carefully researched casefile, a very good one, if a little on the graphic side for me. (Damn. Why am I such a light-weight?) As it unfolds, it gets better and better, and has memorable climax and denouement. I'm classifying this as gen fic, Teen-for violence.

Title: Fragile
Author: Ophelia
E-Mail: OpheliaMac@aol.com
Rating: R--mature themes
Category: T, A
Spoilers: General Fourth Season, my own fanfic story, "Poison," and a story called "Favorite Child" by Lindsay, which gives an interesting interpretation on the choice the Consortium forced Bill Mulder to make.
Keywords: Mulder/Scully UST
Summary: Mulder and Scully are called in on a case described as an alien abduction, but Mulder suspects something both more commonplace and more sinister. Mulder angst, Scully angst, imaginary small town in Wisconsin angst.

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Comments

[wendelah1]

The influence was to fandom's idea of Mulder as victim. He's irrevocably damaged, his father beat him, he was psychotic when he was a child, when he profiles he goes nuts. When he profiles he vomits. When he profiles he doesn't eat or sleep, etc. I read part of it and gave up. It's way, way, way too long, there is far too much vomiting, and because its setting is pre-x-files, there is no Scully.

Here you go: http://fanlore.org/wiki/Oklahoma

On the series most of the time when Mulder is working, he's intense, he's focused, he's obsessed but he's completely functional.There is nothing in canon--except "Grotesque," which is only one episode, to support their fanon yet it was taken as gospel for a long, long time. It was a very popular story that influenced characterization in fic.

[bmerb.livejournal.com]

Huh. I remember him being pretty obsessed in Grotesque and not sleeping normally, but also remaining focused and rational. It doesn't seem out of line at all that his father would have beat him as a kid, that seems rather fitting with his cold, distant, dysfunctional interactions with his son, but I don't buy the "goes nuts and vomits a lot" part. Meh. I think I'll pass on Oklahoma. Thanks for explaining, I was feeling awfully confused!