Naraht ([identity profile] emily-shore.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xf_book_club 2008-04-16 05:38 pm (UTC)

This story, I must admit, didn't really do it for me.

The last two sentences are rather nicely done, however.

Mouth relaxed, eyes closed, hair falling gently over his forehead, he looks like a complete innocent.

Which is how I know he's gone.
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