Story 213: "Undying" by Elanor G

[wendelah1]

This story is told from Tooms's POV and it's just as creepy as that suggests. Elanor G is better known for her well-plotted casefiles, and they are excellent too, but this story is darkly original. The author rates it R but I would give it no more than a PG-13 for violence.

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Read "Undying".

Comments

[estella-c.livejournal.com]

So agreed! Fathoms Five isn't easy to take, but it's one of ficdom's authentic tragedies. I'd add The Other Man by Jess and Fata Morgana by Julie Fortune. I'll bet Wendy could think of others, but there aren't many.

[mogster495.livejournal.com]

The Other Man really knocked me for a loop. I thought I saw where it was going and then WHAM! I think I laughed a little at the end.
I haven't read the other one you mentioned.