Story 213: "Undying" by Elanor G
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This story is told from Tooms's POV and it's just as creepy as that suggests. Elanor G is better known for her well-plotted casefiles, and they are excellent too, but this story is darkly original. The author rates it R but I would give it no more than a PG-13 for violence.
Please send the author some feedback and then let us know what you think.
Read "Undying".
Please send the author some feedback and then let us know what you think.
Read "Undying".
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Date: 2012-09-29 02:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-09-29 06:34 pm (UTC)Not sure about Scully being undying though. I've always thought Clyde Bruckman was referring to her not dying of cancer. I never been a fan of Tithonus, I just thought the writers were being lazy with that one.
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Date: 2012-09-29 11:12 pm (UTC)This said I agree that the ending smacked of lazy writing and I agree with your Clyde Bruckman's theory. That he would mean she survives her cancer makes sense.
But I'm glad this "Scully is immortal" trope exists, because if it hadn't, Penumbra wouldn't have written Fathoms Five, which is amazing stuff.
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Date: 2012-09-29 11:20 pm (UTC)hateddisliked Fathoms Five. Scully would never even attempt to kill herself, she is Catholic and we just don't do that. Even if you are not officially apart of the faith, once you have been a Catholic you never consider it (suicide).no subject
Date: 2012-09-29 11:39 pm (UTC)I know Scully's attempt to kill herself is one of the most controversial point of this story.
I myself find it plausible that Scully would not want to live forever, that the burden of eternal life would be too much for her to bear.
However, I have a hard time buying that she would try to off herself while young. But at the same time it looks like she's experimenting - what a bullet through the head will do to her. She hopes she's going to die but deep down she *knows* she's not going to.
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Date: 2012-09-30 12:18 am (UTC)Lol, Penumbra is so awesome we talk about her work in other writer's threads.
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Date: 2012-10-02 08:38 am (UTC)Yes, I agree, Scully would bite the bullet (AH!) and not let her emotions get the better of her. But that scene was so wonderfully written that I can suspend my disbelief just for the amazing experience it was to read it.
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Date: 2012-10-03 03:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-04 03:06 am (UTC)I haven't read the other one you mentioned.
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Date: 2012-09-29 10:25 pm (UTC)Edited to add: oh well this was short so, I read it anyway. It was an interesting piece. It's not often that you get to see the POV of the monster. Tooms laughing his head off at the cinema was a great scene - love his comment about blood being too thin, how creepy! And I liked the way the story travelled through times with the different characters. I thought that "his thoughts are long and slow" was a clever way to describe his 'otherness'. I liked that the old detective was used as one of the character.
One nitpick though. Are we supposed to think that the cross in the last piece belongs to Scully? Because the necklace Tooms got off Scully was not a cross. It was some roundish trinket.
This would make a good Halloween story. Nice and creepy.
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Date: 2012-09-30 12:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-01 11:15 am (UTC)I think that the cross and crucifix were meant to be symbolic? Also given that he mentions the vampire movie. They're symbols that ward or kill vampires. The wooden crucifix was something he took at the beginning of his life, and the gold cross at the end (of course I have to disregard the fact, like
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Date: 2012-10-03 03:26 pm (UTC)Specific things that I liked. It's well-crafted. Frank Briggs. The ambiguous perceptions of Scully and Mulder at the end. It might have been a reference to S's immortality, but M is mentioned too. Maybe it's that "shining" of hers, the sensing of the weird that made up to a minor extent for the way the writers kept her away from actual supernatural events during the first seasons. They should have done more with it. Shoulda, coulda, woulda. Sometimes it occurs to me that we're discussing ancient history. Not Roman Empire ancient, but still...
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Date: 2012-10-04 12:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-04 06:58 pm (UTC)Rant over.
Aaah, that's better. *g*
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Date: 2012-10-04 07:10 pm (UTC)This is basically how I feel, too. In fact, the whole idea of XF3 makes me really nervous.
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Date: 2012-10-04 06:47 pm (UTC)It's been what 18 years? Good grief! Okay, now I'm picturing Mulder in a toga...*headesk*
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Date: 2016-08-07 03:01 am (UTC)Also, I really enjoyed this fix for multiple reasons. It's so other, deliciously so.
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Date: 2016-08-07 04:09 am (UTC)I think "Undying" is brilliant. (And I think