definitely. the use of parallel universes was very good here, but it does leave the story vulnerable to a lot of illogical situations. and the story did come full circle, and in context it was a good ending, but i still feel that after all of the pain and sadness, that tiny glimmer of hope wasn't enough to make me feel better. basically, i'm saying that it was a good story but i didn't like it. does that make sense?
just to be clear, i never meant to insult anyone. it was a very good story, but it left me feeling a little unsatisfied. sorry if anyone took my criticisms personally. :)
and i'll absolutely stick with you! if everyone wrote exactly the same thing over and over, it would get boring. i like having new things to read.
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Date: 2008-01-30 12:55 am (UTC)just to be clear, i never meant to insult anyone. it was a very good story, but it left me feeling a little unsatisfied. sorry if anyone took my criticisms personally. :)
and i'll absolutely stick with you! if everyone wrote exactly the same thing over and over, it would get boring. i like having new things to read.