Oh absolutely. Any story of any length is probably going to throw up nitpicks for any reader who knows more about subject x than the author did, but I've gotten through and liked stories with far more problems than Iolokus, which were far, far inferior in the writing. That quote in particular could cover a vast multitude of authorly sins. Also it makes me want to cry more than a bit...
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Date: 2009-10-30 03:47 pm (UTC)