This story was good. The author really had a command of the subject matter and the characters. However, it was a little long winded.
Fan fiction is pretty cool because there is not a great need for exposition. The reader (usually) already has a lot of background knowledge, and lengthy character descriptions and observations are not necessary. I think this story could be trimmed a lot and still retain what's important.
That being said, 'Fragile’ is a very interesting and thorough story. I enjoyed it even if I skimmed some paragraphs.
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Date: 2013-01-09 12:15 am (UTC)Fan fiction is pretty cool because there is not a great need for exposition. The reader (usually) already has a lot of background knowledge, and lengthy character descriptions and observations are not necessary. I think this story could be trimmed a lot and still retain what's important.
That being said, 'Fragile’ is a very interesting and thorough story. I enjoyed it even if I skimmed some paragraphs.