I read that story now and it was a really weird experience, because it turned out I've already read it once. This time around, while obviously reading a fic, I was still more focused on my messed up memory of it. First of all I did not remember the actual plot, just the witty dialouges. I had no idea how it goes, where it ends (or that it sort of doesn't end, because only the Sleepless part ends properly Duane Barry one is only started). Then I started to wonder why do I remember certain parts, while I completely didn't recognize the fic after title, summary or even plenty of paragraphs at the begining. And the answer is pretty simple: I don't really like this story.
I admit that the author has a good, well practiced style, but it is also a specific style. She writes realistically, with brutal, coarse descriptions and dialouges. I know it is what some people look for in fiction, but I'm afraid I'm one of them. I'm not a fan of overly sweet, utopic, domestic bliss in fiction either, but some sort of a balance between the two. Around the level of the show, actually. Hard times mixed with good ones. Even if something is drastic, it's never shown in too drastic way. Interactions are often violent, but rarely crude.
As I said, some may look for something like this style. I know plenty of people who prefer it, usually argumenting that it's more realistic. Perhaps. But I usually don't come to fiction to find reality, that would be a bit redundant in my opinion.
So, yes, the style puts me off. Also, Krycek in second season. I've read some good stories about it, (Ha, I recomended one here, ages ago! XD) but in general I'm not a fan of stories put in this place on the timeline. I usually read stories set around Tunguska/TERMA or The Red and The Black. Prefer to write them then as well. Perhaps it's easier to get them together, when Alex is still young and as innocent as we can get him, perhaps it's more believable as well, but I hate how always the future we already know of hangs over their heads. For some reason I prefer, when it's all out in the open and they have to get through it (yes, I'm a sucker for a happy ending, rare and unbelievable as they are), than when it's this darkness they're heading towards to.
Also, I really don't like the way Scully is shown here. I usually suffer through Scully portrayals in slash fics, because I am a slasher, but my favourite character is still Dana Scully, which makes some stories really painful to get through. (And I've been known to abandon promisingly looking slash story, because I couldn't stand the way Scully was shown.) In this story she seems so jealous and constantly angry and mean. I think Scully was in a way jealous through Mulder's partnership with Krycek, simply because she couldn't be there and the whoel situation was difficult for her, I don't doubt that. But I think it belittles her to show her so petty. Was she irritated with the way things went? Sure. Was she taking ot out on almost everyone, but especially Krycek? Highly doubt so. As far as I recall she only really snaps at him once and to be fair to her Mulder is than dealing with Duanne and she's scarred for him. I don't think she was so bitter and angry because Alex as it was shown in this fic, that's all.
Still, the story has some really great dialouges and is and interesting show of Sleepless episode. It just isn't what I like in the stories and it's not by far one of my most liked ones.
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Date: 2013-01-27 01:15 am (UTC)I admit that the author has a good, well practiced style, but it is also a specific style. She writes realistically, with brutal, coarse descriptions and dialouges. I know it is what some people look for in fiction, but I'm afraid I'm one of them. I'm not a fan of overly sweet, utopic, domestic bliss in fiction either, but some sort of a balance between the two. Around the level of the show, actually. Hard times mixed with good ones. Even if something is drastic, it's never shown in too drastic way. Interactions are often violent, but rarely crude.
As I said, some may look for something like this style. I know plenty of people who prefer it, usually argumenting that it's more realistic. Perhaps. But I usually don't come to fiction to find reality, that would be a bit redundant in my opinion.
So, yes, the style puts me off. Also, Krycek in second season. I've read some good stories about it, (Ha, I recomended one here, ages ago! XD) but in general I'm not a fan of stories put in this place on the timeline. I usually read stories set around Tunguska/TERMA or The Red and The Black. Prefer to write them then as well. Perhaps it's easier to get them together, when Alex is still young and as innocent as we can get him, perhaps it's more believable as well, but I hate how always the future we already know of hangs over their heads. For some reason I prefer, when it's all out in the open and they have to get through it (yes, I'm a sucker for a happy ending, rare and unbelievable as they are), than when it's this darkness they're heading towards to.
Also, I really don't like the way Scully is shown here. I usually suffer through Scully portrayals in slash fics, because I am a slasher, but my favourite character is still Dana Scully, which makes some stories really painful to get through. (And I've been known to abandon promisingly looking slash story, because I couldn't stand the way Scully was shown.) In this story she seems so jealous and constantly angry and mean. I think Scully was in a way jealous through Mulder's partnership with Krycek, simply because she couldn't be there and the whoel situation was difficult for her, I don't doubt that. But I think it belittles her to show her so petty. Was she irritated with the way things went? Sure. Was she taking ot out on almost everyone, but especially Krycek? Highly doubt so. As far as I recall she only really snaps at him once and to be fair to her Mulder is than dealing with Duanne and she's scarred for him. I don't think she was so bitter and angry because Alex as it was shown in this fic, that's all.
Still, the story has some really great dialouges and is and interesting show of Sleepless episode. It just isn't what I like in the stories and it's not by far one of my most liked ones.