Why don't you try section 1? There is no sex at all in it, just mutual, unexpressed lust. It will give you the flavor of the writing and of eliade's characterizations, so you can comment if you want. If you want, you can keep going, if not, I'm going to post a new story tomorrow.
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Date: 2013-02-03 11:37 pm (UTC)This is supposed to be fun. No pressure. OK?