The style still bothers me. It's a mundane thing: getting a haircut. To call in multiple (and familiar) connotations to convey something subtle to the reader is, I think, overthinking on the part of the writer.
I don't see how a writer can over-think something. Every word is supposed to matter. Maybe you meant something else? Maybe you think she's using the wrong words?
Getting a haircut can be a mundane thing, and perhaps it is for you, but it isn't for everyone, and it certainly isn't in every situation. When I cut my hair after being accepted into nursing school, it was a kind of rite of passage for me. I had long hair, well past my shoulder blades, and it had taken me years to grow it that long. When my husband started working for The Man and got his first corporate haircut, it was a big deal. Other haircuts that aren't mundane: a little boy's first haircut, Samson's hair being cut, the buzz-cut soldiers were traditionally give upon entrance into the military, a novice cutting her hair and taking her final vows.
Maybe that element of characterization doesn't work for you but it's quite deliberate--and she is not the only XF writer to have used it.
But this vague existence to which God Carter consigned M&S is irking the entire fandom and getting in the way of creativity. I say ignore it and create your own situation, but it's an individual call. I suppose canon remains canon, GD it.
He'll never be able to please everyone--the fan lists of demands are extensive and often mutually exclusive. Yes to William. No to William. Yes to the myth-arc. Monsters of the Week are only acceptable episodes. Some fans are happy that they're bringing back the old favorites, like Cancer Man. Personally I never want to see that old fart's face again. Some people are happy we are getting any new canon at all, some people are refusing to watch because we aren't getting a 20 episode season. (Yes, really) I'm sure if CC is following the internet chatter, he's wondering why he ever agreed to this in the first place.
I see the messy canon as a source of creativity not an impediment. YMMV.
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Date: 2015-04-12 09:47 pm (UTC)I don't see how a writer can over-think something. Every word is supposed to matter. Maybe you meant something else? Maybe you think she's using the wrong words?
Getting a haircut can be a mundane thing, and perhaps it is for you, but it isn't for everyone, and it certainly isn't in every situation. When I cut my hair after being accepted into nursing school, it was a kind of rite of passage for me. I had long hair, well past my shoulder blades, and it had taken me years to grow it that long. When my husband started working for The Man and got his first corporate haircut, it was a big deal. Other haircuts that aren't mundane: a little boy's first haircut, Samson's hair being cut, the buzz-cut soldiers were traditionally give upon entrance into the military, a novice cutting her hair and taking her final vows.
Maybe that element of characterization doesn't work for you but it's quite deliberate--and she is not the only XF writer to have used it.
But this vague existence to which God Carter consigned M&S is irking the entire fandom and getting in the way of creativity. I say ignore it and create your own situation, but it's an individual call. I suppose canon remains canon, GD it.
He'll never be able to please everyone--the fan lists of demands are extensive and often mutually exclusive. Yes to William. No to William. Yes to the myth-arc. Monsters of the Week are only acceptable episodes. Some fans are happy that they're bringing back the old favorites, like Cancer Man. Personally I never want to see that old fart's face again. Some people are happy we are getting any new canon at all, some people are refusing to watch because we aren't getting a 20 episode season. (Yes, really) I'm sure if CC is following the internet chatter, he's wondering why he ever agreed to this in the first place.
I see the messy canon as a source of creativity not an impediment. YMMV.