It's giving away the plot if I tell her the name of the Syntax6 fic. If she's reading through the fics here, she'll find it.
As for the sex itself: pretty overheated and overspecific. But this dates from the days when CC the virginal prohibited what we were all thinking about, so I suppose it served a purpose.
There are very few sex scenes in fanfic (or litfic) that are worth reading imho. This one seemed servicable enough. It had better be "over-heated"; otherwise how is it going to reset the timeline? *g*
I would have felt fine about a fade to black but I'm not the average fanfic reader.
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Date: 2015-08-26 02:42 am (UTC)As for the sex itself: pretty overheated and overspecific. But this dates from the days when CC the virginal prohibited what we were all thinking about, so I suppose it served a purpose.
There are very few sex scenes in fanfic (or litfic) that are worth reading imho. This one seemed servicable enough. It had better be "over-heated"; otherwise how is it going to reset the timeline? *g*
I would have felt fine about a fade to black but I'm not the average fanfic reader.