Story #1: "Closed Colony, Special Stock" by Branwell

[emily-shore.livejournal.com]

To get things rolling, I'll start by picking a story myself. Hopefully it will prompt some interesting discussion.

Closed Colony, Special Stock by Branwell

Rating: PG-13 for mild language, innuendo, disturbing
images and ideas.
Category: X, A, M/S Friendship
Casefile with Mytharc connection

Summary: A body is found in a top secret area on an Air
Force Base. No one knows the cause of death, or why the
dead woman was in a secured area. The Air Force officer in
charge makes a last ditch effort to prevent the project
from being closed down. He uses his clout to get the FBI to
send Mulder and Scully to investigate. Scully finds she
knows the right questions to ask--but how?

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Comments

[wendelah1]

This was written for virtual season 8, so I suppose this is AU from the outset. Mulder hasn't been abducted, so I am guessing they threw out Requiem altogether. I can play this game. I like Mulder/Scully partnership stories and I like casefiles so I guess I was predisposed to like this story.

Having it written from a first person point of view was an interesting choice. I think first person is hard to write well, but I think that it worked here. Initially, I thought this was just being told from a first person outsider viewpoint. The first clue for me, that this story was going to be a little bit different, was when the character started overhearing things, like those individual interviews in the closed office. Then the chewed lead pencils turn up in the desk of someone who doesn't bite on their pencils. Then the spirit's thoughts start bleeding into Scully's brain. That was a surprise, although maybe it shouldn't have been. Scully has exhibited signs of paranormal ability in the past, she has just always denied them.

"But they are involved, aren't they?" she responds. "I must
be having a hunch. You have hunches all the time."

"That's me, Scully. Not you. Sometimes my unconscious
solves a problem before I'm aware of the process."

"It's not always about you, Mulder," Scully says, directing
a severe look his way.

For a second he gets this sick expression. Then he
registers the little smile she can't quite suppress. He
gives a grimace that might be taken as a smile.

This is not an exchange that could have taken place in earlier seasons. This is as direct a reference to what I assume is a change in their level of intimacy as we are going to get in this story, however. The scene then goes on.

"Talk to me, Scully," he bursts out. "What does it feel
like? Can you trace a reasoning process or is it like a
voice in your head? Or just a feeling?"

Her smile disappears and she seems to be looking right at
me. But her eyes aren't focused. "It's like a voice from
another room. A door opens or closes and it's louder or
softer. Or maybe a radio station that fades in the hills
and gets strong again on flat land. It's coming from
outside of me. Mulder, is that how it was for you?"

Mulder's nods his head and then shakes it. "It was more
than one voice. There were thousands, as though everyone in
a football stadium was trying to get my attention. There
was no room left for MY thoughts. Are you sure you're all
right?"

"I'm fine," she says quickly. "No, really--I'm fine."

This sure seems like character development to me. Scully is having a paranormal experience and isn't denying it. She is telling Mulder the truth. What has happened to bring this about? It sure makes me want to go read the rest of VS8 to find out.

So we find out who the spirit is, and eventually who the murderer is as well. As soon as we find out that the Consortium is involved, the outcome is pretty much a given. There is a fire, the evidence is lost, and there is a cover-up. This is The X-Files, after all. But along the way, Branwell is able to give us a real character who lived and suffered at the hands of the evil scientists and their co-conspirators. Her thoughts about her fate, as she attempts to discover it, along with the agents, are by turns poignant and humorous. Some of them even add to our knowledge of our favorite duo, as in this sentence.

Even in the dark, Mulder finds the shortcut to Daddy's
house. It's not my doing; he remembers it. There's a
constant seething in Mulder's brain. It pushes me back,
like the wind holding a sailboat offshore.

I really like that description of Mulder's thought processes. It gives a unique but I think accurate assessment of how differently he thinks. Even the spirit world is impressed. I liked this story, and hope other people will give it a chance, despite its lack of overt MSR. This had all of the elements that I loved about the show. It was a lot of fun having a new episode to enjoy.

[emily-shore.livejournal.com]

Your opinion and mine are very close when it comes to this story--close enough that I felt I was plagiarizing you a bit while writing my comment. Ah well, I'm sure we'll differ soon enough.

Even in the dark, Mulder finds the shortcut to Daddy's
house. It's not my doing; he remembers it. There's a
constant seething in Mulder's brain. It pushes me back,
like the wind holding a sailboat offshore.

This bit really interested me too, although I'm not sure that I interpreted it as a compliment. I saw it as a way of saying that Mulder's brain is so busy and overactive, so wrapped up in his own speculations, that in a sense it's not capable of making room for possibilities that he hasn't already seized upon himself. Mulder is about making new hypotheses, even if he doesn't know much to start with; Scully, the scientist, is more about observing and seeing how the world works before passing judgment on it. So that makes her more open to these things, I guess? More passive? Or just more psychic? I don't know, really.

Glad that you liked it. I thought that you probably would!

[wendelah1]

I got an email response back from Branwell. She came over and read our comments, and was so happy to know people were enjoying her story. It's a Win-Win!