Story 213: "Undying" by Elanor G

[wendelah1]

This story is told from Tooms's POV and it's just as creepy as that suggests. Elanor G is better known for her well-plotted casefiles, and they are excellent too, but this story is darkly original. The author rates it R but I would give it no more than a PG-13 for violence.

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Read "Undying".

Comments

[littlegreen42.livejournal.com]

"For Christ sake man, yes you created those characters but you suck at plot writing. Give the job to someone more talented, call Ridley Scott or Joss Whedon, or call back Vince Gilligan or Morgan and Wong. Chris, face it, you're a crap story writer!!!"

This is basically how I feel, too. In fact, the whole idea of XF3 makes me really nervous.

[wendelah1]

I don't think there is much to worry about. This is one movie I can virtually guarantee is not getting the green light, not unless they reboot the entire series in, say twenty years.